Figurative language in old poetry

https://docs.google.com/drawings/edit?id=1Uy7AMojDpm4BXxfGdYXCt40jOCXzdITx_P_gDuG7j60

Spa poem

Life on campus
 When in SPA Iam bored
like completing a crossword
Bella hits me in the eye
and makes me cry
This campus is violence
like a kid pulling his eyelids
My heart beats really fast
hes runnning faster than a boy on the track
This is life on campus
at least you dont have to live near a cactus
THE END

"Graph Sherbert blog post 2011

I cant relate to the "Grape Sherbert"  poem because I dont really think about what I remember eating.The phrase that help me imagine this poem is when the author mentions the things he sees, feels, and hears.Imagery helps the reader to have a visual pictutre while the reader is reading the story and it gives a mental picture in your mind as you read.

"I am offering this poem"by Jimmy Santiago Baca

When I hear people
I hear anger
I hear fear
I hear rage

When People talk all you hear is
Who do you think your talking to like that
are you sure your head is put on right
why are you acting like a fool

When people talk I hear
screaming
no sense in words
and it sounds like gibberish

"I am offering this poem"by Jimmy Santiago

The emotion that "I am Offering This Poem" by Jimmy Santiago Baca expresses is love.For example, the author mentions that he loves that person after every section.This shows that the author really loves this person.In addition he also is giving the person a poem and hes comparing it to the things that he needs to live.This shows that he loves this person because he wants this person to live.Thats why the emotion was love.

" Same song" Paragraph

Looking good is not important because when people are trying to look good they are just trying to impress someone else and I think people try to look good because they are not happy with who they are and how they look so they have to try to be somebody they are not by changing their appearance.People try to look good because they like looking good or they want to impress somebody.It depends on the person if it really worth putting a lot of effort into their physical appearance because some people look so bad that when they try to look good its not enough, they still as bad as they did without all that makeup or even worse.Sometimes it is worth because its better looking good than looking like you just got out of bed.At the end I think my appearance really matters.